Your Smile

I would journey by day
rays from your face
showing the way
brighter than Sun
lights up every horizon
running by sight
chasing your daylight
travel at light-speed
to catch glimpse
of your bright teeth
Push back an eclipse
to get a good view
of your painted lips
gift you rings of Saturn
cosmic engagement
a beaming yearn
miles and miles
longer than Nile…….

……..I would chat bare breeze
just thinking about your smile


~ by B Majnun on June 18, 2008.

5 Responses to “Your Smile”

  1. Nice words you got there.

  2. Thanks for kind comment Tomachfive.

  3. wow so nice 🙂

  4. that was really good. i think you should put copyrights over ur writing!!!

  5. Thanks for comment Amina, I have a Creative Commons License –

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: